ff151,
New rules for Critique are here:
http://digital-photography-school.co...ad.php?t=10887
Your Critique will be better if you ask a more specific question, about what you believe could be improved, something that worries you about the photo, more than 'how to improve.'
When you read the Guidelines, it suggests you include your camera settings; as much other information as you can put in (time of day, weather, reason you took it) will add to comments/suggestions from Critiquers. Thanks for taking the time to read and heed the list, and adding what you can to your thread.