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Old 02-12-2008, 11:40 PM
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Originally Posted by geotography View Post
TomTomTuning,

I like your photo and you have captured Mickey's loveliness. I like your soft light alot. I have virtually no experience with studio portraits so I am sure others can offer you more in this critique. I did notice something that I think should have been avoided: those ripples in your black sheet background on the left. I know people have used pleats in art background but I don't think you intended those and I think it would have been better without them.

Nice work!
Totally right. I am looking to get a muslin this week and ill make sure to look for that next time.


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I agree with geotagography about the sheets. One other thing I might consider given your model and background would be to use some light behind her to separate her from the background a bit more. Otherwise her hair tends to blend in to the black. Nicely done though! I look forward to seeing more from your shoots.
Yea, in my thoughts (see original post), thats exactly what i stated.

I will be giving it another shot this week with a friend and maybe mickey again.

Wish me luck, lol
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